mommysquad: (Default)
mommysquad ([personal profile] mommysquad) wrote in [community profile] hms_anon2012-05-06 01:52 am

(no subject)


hi y'all
here's a post

deletion thread

(Anonymous) 2012-05-07 01:51 am (UTC)(link)
it's sort of bizarre to me how you're arguing about the elements of the sport instead of say, the impact participating in gymnastics has and how it's the best sport for someone to participate in for whatever reasons

(Anonymous) 2012-05-07 01:53 am (UTC)(link)
do you have data for that

(Anonymous) 2012-05-07 01:54 am (UTC)(link)
this is a speech right? not a paper? speeches that are persuasive don't need hard data to be successful necessarily

(Anonymous) 2012-05-07 01:54 am (UTC)(link)
i need five cited sources and a works cited page

(Anonymous) 2012-05-07 01:56 am (UTC)(link)
ok so find some gymnast talking about how important gymnastics was

that's not 'data' but it is a source

(Anonymous) 2012-05-07 01:56 am (UTC)(link)
you need 5 cited sources and this is your whole speech?

(Anonymous) 2012-05-07 01:57 am (UTC)(link)
i have 4 sources in there, gotta add one more